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Monday 30 March 2020

Under the Bed

 Under the Bed 

One of the online work we could do was writing. For writing there were prompts on our class site where we could choose from to write about. One of them are about a picture of a pup lying down on the ice and there were some questions and some activities that we have to work on first then we could start writing about the prompt using a story starter that is already in the slideshow where the activities and the prompts are. The prompt that I used and worked on was a picture of a boy peeking under his bed. 

Here is what I did:

Question time:
What was the noise that Michael heard?
The noise that Michael heard was a sound of little footsteps that was disturbing him.
What did he see under the bed? 
What he saw under the bed was a huge terrifying eyes with a red long smile below his red ghastly eyes.
What will happen next?
Michael thought It was a gigantic horrifying monster but little does he know there was also something beside him that will make him more terrified.
What did he feel when he first heard the noise?
He was disturbed at first but he also felt nervous about what the sound was.
What time of day do you think it is? 
Night because it is quite dark but there is a lamp that is shining bright on the floor above his head.
Have you ever been frightened of anything?
Yes, whenever I see an insect I sometimes get scared if it's big and it crawls or flies, I just lose myself. 
Why do things seem more frightening at night?
Because it's dark and it's so quiet that you could imagine seeing a monster.


Sentence Challenge:
Scuttling, loud hissing, howling


Picture perfect:


Story Starter: 


The scuttling noise had disturbed Michael, and he’d shot bolt upright in bed. After taking a deep breath, he flung himself onto the smooth wooden boards of his bedroom floor and took a peek… 

Suddenly Michael jumped up with surprise as he saw the most terrifying smile he has ever seen. He bounced up onto his bed and covered himself with his blanket. He wanted to sleep so badly but as he was about to sleep he forgot to close his lamp and saw a huge shadow shining upon his blanket. As he turned around to his side he took a huge deep breath on a little hole he made so that he can breathe because his blanket is so thick that you can’t breathe underneath but you can kinda see through it. When Micheal turned his back to the other side, he saw that the shadow wasn’t there anymore. He took a little peek above his blanket to see if it was actually gone. It was really strange for him because he was always told that there was something under his bed but he never believed. Michael is very fearless, so he got out of bed and bent down but all he saw was his missing teddy bear. He grabbed it and glanced on the floor. Looking at it so deeply with his big eyes and saw that there was no evidence of the monster with the huge shadow he saw. It was like it never existed so Michael went back to bed and was falling asleep so fast that he forgot to look to the other side if it was there.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Denise. I really liked your blog. You have written clearly and I found the story interesting. Whats on the other side? Perhaps you could blog about comes next.
    Mrs Bowman

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