This week, for reading, one of our task, we are doing a info graphic about what causes thunder and lightning. We have all watched a video to understand the story we are reading and to make our info graphic interesting, we can do different kind of info graphic.
For my one I have chosen a list about thunder and lightning and to find out facts about it, of course we did read the story first. For our reading we read a non-fiction story so that means we read something about real life.
Here is my post:
Hi Denise, I like how your infographic is clear and easy to read and how you have a lot of information. But maybe next time you could add more on number four where is says "When there is lightning there is thunder"
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Fria, thank you for the comment you put in my blog post. I really appreciate the things you really like about my post. I will try and put more information on where it says where "When there is lightning there is thunder"
DeleteThank you:)
Kia ora Denise, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you told us facts about lightning and thunder, they are really cool!
The facts you have used are really good. I like number 2, the one where you told us lightning was six times hotter than the sun!
To improve, you could always add more detail, why you did this, and also just a bit more colour and a more standing out font.
What is lightning made of?
What is thunder made of?
Bye Denise!
-Amelia 😉
Hi Amelia, Thank you for commenting and the nice thing you said.
DeleteHi Denise
ReplyDeleteI like that you added the process it really helped to understand what you did. What did you use to make the poster? Maybe you should add more examples of thing that burn easily.
Yours sincerely
Toby
Hi Toby, Yes I will try and add more examples and thank you for the comment.
DeleteKumusta Denise!
ReplyDeleteFirstly, this is a interesting infographic. Something I like about your blog post is that you added a strong description. I also like how you added lots of information and specific detail in your infographic.
Well explained infographic, but I think you could work on making the writing bigger so we can read it better and you could add more pictures.
Kapai to mahi!
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Mya <3
Hi Mya, I can make my writing a bit bigger but by the way thank you for the comment you have there.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora i'm Olivia from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you decided to make this blog because it was really interesting.
Did you think about describing more about the sandstorm so we can have a picture of it in our head so we know what you are talking about.
Because you made it on sandstorms it seemed like a really great blog and it was.
Why did you chose this topic
Kind regards Olivia
Hi Olivia, I think you commented on the wrong post because this post is about thunder and lightning and it is not close to sandstorm but if not thank you anyway.
DeleteWe were given this topic to help us with our learning.