As we landed on the moon, my heart felt like it was going to burst but as I laid my foot on the moon, this is the first thing I said:
Moon
Dark, Gloomy
Gleam, glimmer, mellows
It lives in space
Darkness
Cinquain Poem
The Moon
Tuesday, 17 December 2019
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Kia ora Denise!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mikey. I'm a part of the Summer Learning Journey team this year and I'll be commenting on some of your wonderful blog posts over the summer break. Congratulations on completing your first activity! :)
This is an amazing poem, Denise. You've used some really great descriptive words to describe the moon and space. I enjoyed it so much I've shown it to some of the other Summer Learning Journey blog commenters! :) Do you like writing poetry?
Have an awesome afternoon and keep up the great blogging.
Mā te wā,
Mikey :)
Hi Mikey, thanks for commenting on my first SLJ blog post. I kinda like writing poetry because it's really fun and you get to kind a express yourself, anyway thank you. I hope that you and other people will keep on commenting on my blog posts for the SLJ.
DeleteHi Denise,
DeleteYou are more than welcome. I really enjoyed reading it. :)
That's so true! It's a fun, creative outlet, isn't it? Art is another fun way to express yourself. Do you like art as well?
Thanks for your reply, Denise. Talk soon,
Mikey :)