I like Dolphin
I like them.
Ask me why?
Because they squeak so much.
Because their fast at swimming.
Because their are fun to swim with.
Because they sleep with one eye open.
Because they're good at doing tricks.
Because their .
Because they are chilly.
Because their nice and shareful.
Because ………
Because ……….
That’s why I like Dolphin.
Hi Denise its Isabel from Room 8, I like how you used describing words that helped made a picture in my head of why you love Dolphins. Maybe you could add pictures of Dolphins to help you describe what you're saying. Look forward seeing more of your post.
ReplyDeleteMoana Isabel its Denise from Rm4,Thank you for commenting on my blog and thank you for liking my work.It's also wonderful that you love dolphin's and I will try to remember to put some interesting pictures on my work next time.
DeleteHi Denise its Samuel from room 8, that poem was amazing and i also love dolphins maybe next time put Less of because. I can't wait till your next post.
ReplyDeleteHey Denise, This is Hayden nice job on your poem! It really tells me why you like them.Is there any other animals you really like?
ReplyDeleteHi Hayden,Thank you for commenting on my blog and thank you for liking my work.Yes I do have some more favorite animals and its a cheetah,giraffe and a elephant.I will look forward for my next writing.
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