In class we have been doing lots of writing and what we did was, we made some llamas made out of pastel, crayon, dye, and black and white paint and we all made our own one. First we used pencil to draw our llama. Then we used crayon to design our background and used dye to make it colourful. After, we used black and white to colour in the body of our llama and pastel to draw a party hat or crown or flower crown on our llama's head.
After we had made our llama, it was time to do some writing, we were all able to do free writing which is doing any kind of writing you want. The topic for our writing was about our llamas. It could be about how it was made or a story to make it more fun.
There I was, coming to life and finally free from everything that my creator wanted to do to me. I leapt off the table as fast I could then…BOOP... I looked at my back... “Huh.. where is my background?” I said in confusion.
I told myself that maybe something did this to me to make me free. I looked outside.
It was pitch black. I wondered if I was in a world that was totally weird. I tried finding a way to go outside but I didn’t know where to go, but when I looked at my back something was behind me! I could totally see a big shadow shining upon me. I was scared, terrified, but at the same time I was brave. If I crossed this huge shadow I will get out of here. As I looked up…”EEK!” Huh? Oh. It was just glass door. What a scaredy cat I am? I went closer to the huge glass door and slid myself out the door.
I tried running out but I fell under the deck. I was stuck and couldn’t see anything, it made me think that this building has a secret door under this room because I could see a little light shining on an old little door in front of me. I ran to it but it wouldn’t budge, I tried using a bark to open it and it still wouldn’t open. My beautiful imagination came and that door will have a beautiful room fill with llamas that will make friends with me. This made me really wanted to open the door, while I was looking for something to open it, I found a paper and on that paper it had letters, different kinds of letters.
Myself tried reading it to see if it will open the door, but how would I read it if it is dark. There I tried to jump up to reach the wooden plank to help me go up and to read what the paper said. Suddenly my head had an idea and it was, if every time I jump, I would be able to see the different letters. I jumped then started to say the letters out loud each time I jumped.
O ...P ...E ...N...D...O ...O…..R... BRRRRRRRR… the door opened. I was jumping up and down fill with happiness. I ran to the door fill with excitement.
I woke up, feeling dizzy and couldn’t see what was happening. I was worried if something happened to me, but I was alright. I got up and a llama was right in front of me.
“Ahhh….”, I screamed,
“Who are you?”,
“Hello, my name is Bo...tt...le” said the llama,
"My name is...Lama",
“ And Bottle’s your name, right” I replied,
“Yes it is, I was n..a..m..e..d before my parents” Bottle said, twitching his head,
“I could see”.
He told me where I was and he said I was in a world full of llamas. I was really happy that I was in a world full of llamas but at the same time I was kind of worried if I would stay here forever. Because in the world I was in before, I didn’t get to meet anyone and… Suddenly a bus came by and there was no one in it. There were also no driver. I came inside of the bus and it was so loud but no llamas was in there. Suddenly, llamas appeared out of nowhere and even the bus driver appeared too. I sat on a seat in the bus but suddenly, everyone started to turn their heads and look at me. At a sudden their faces turned red and became angry. I ran out of the bus and the llamas started chasing me. Even Bottle. I couldn’t believe it. Maybe my imagination was wrong, I thought they would be really friendly, but I was wrong, so wrong.
I opened the door and closed it immediately so the llamas wouldn’t chase me. I turned around and it was morning. I found a hole that looked like a hole. I went to it and slid myself out of the deck. Finally I found stairs to the room that I was into and got back inside of it. I went to the table I was onto before and laid on the table and was ready to be redesigned again.
Here is a picture of the llama I made:
Hi Denise, It's Sam from Yaldhurst Model School Here,
ReplyDeleteI think that it is a fantastic blog post Denise! I really like your picture of the Llama, it is just amazing! I remember once I saw a Llama at this place called Willowbank, which is probably the only place that I have seen one. How long did it take you to make that drawing?
Happy Blogging!
Sam
Hi Denise its me Hasan from Yaldhurst model school.
ReplyDeleteI liked your lama its really cool and funny. I also like the colors and how you detailed it.
This reminded me of when I made a self portrait of my self it looked pretty bad because I was only six.
next time you could add pupils to your lama it looks cool but scary at the same time.
was drawing the lama fun.
Hi Denise! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!
ReplyDeleteWow Denise! I love all of the description you put into the writing, It was great! I also like the way you explained why you made this blog post. I really enjoyed reading it!
have you drawn a llama before?!?!?!?! Because that llama looks incredible! I don't think I could draw a llama as BEAUTIFUL as that! :O
Maybe next time you could quickly check the grammar, because I did find a couple mistakes in there. Try to see if you could find it.
From Hana