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Friday, 14 September 2018

The Mystery Key

W.A.L.T write a descriptive story based on a picture.
In class we had to write about this boy called Adam and what was happening on the picture. We had to write about a boy that is holding a magnifying glass and at the back his dad sitting on a couch. We also had to write what happened before this picture was taken and after this picture taken.

The Mystery Key

One evening this little boy called Adam was playing with his toy car, while his dad was reading his newspaper. Suddenly there was a knock on the door. He opened the door and there was 3 people looking back at him. Then this little girl started to talk and said “ Hello, I’m AJ and this is my friend Ace and my big brother Andrew. We're here because your dad is going to work and your dad said that your too little to stay by yourself so we're here to take care of you” Adam’s dad sat up and got his stuff and went off. Andrew and Ace went near the T.V and sat on the couch. They opened the T.V but AJ and Adam was having a great time by themselves. After few minutes AJ got something out of her bag and it was a key not a ordinary key, a magic key.

AJ gave it to Adam and she also told him that this key will give you luck but you have to find a box somewhere in Adam's house and she also said that “ If you find that box you will have luck forever”. Adam thought it was fake but it wasn’t. Adam went to his bedroom and put it somewhere no one will ever touch it and even his dad. 2 days later Adam was in his bedroom. He took the key out from where he put it last time. He was thinking if it’s a key that gives you good luck all the time or that it might give you lots of money and make you rich. “Ummmmm….. It Might…..” then there was a knock on the door again.
Adam opened the door it was they’re cleaner that comes to their house every Sunday. But it looked like that it was a different person. He asked where was they’re old cleaner that comes to there house every Sunday. The man told Adam that the cleaner was sick so he was in for the day.

While the cleaner was cleaning the house except for Adam’s room because Adam said to not, Adam was in the living room playing chest. The cleaner was looking suspicious and went inside Adam’s bedroom. The cleaner was trying to find the key. He wanted to give Adam bad luck and when the cleaner touch it he will give Adam bad luck. Then suddenly he started to turn into a huge creature. And the creature was starting to shove all of Adam’s stuff then found the key.
Adam heard some shoving noise in his bedroom. So he went in his room and saw a creature holding the key. Adam screamed and ran to the creature and started to tackle him. But then the creature suddenly disappeared out of nowhere. The key dropped and he accidently kicked the key and slid under his bed where he kept his old toy mice. After 3 days Adam forgot about what happened. He was so stress that he lost the key after what happened and he was also using his magnifying glass to find it. Then the door knocked AJ was there she was laughing. He was confused.
“Why are you laughing?” said Adam.

AJ told Adam that he had the wrong key, she gave Adam her old key house because it looked like the same key. Adam was not impressed but ….phew……. He did not lost the key. AJ gave Adam the key and it is important because it is past to tradition to tradition. Also she told him that you still have to find that key and she also gave him a letter that says:

You must find
a little hole in your house and in it,
It has a box that will definitely give you
Good Luck.

Adam took his whole day looking for the key. He looked in his bedroom and his drawers. It wasn’t there. He finally looked under his bed and when he was trying to look for the key he saw a crack under his bed. So he moved his bed in the on the corner of his bedroom. After he saw the crack he looked closer to the hole. He saw his old toy mice and you would not believe it, he saw the box that he was looking for. When he opened the box everything started to glow. It was glowing and glowing till Adam disappeared. He opened his eyes and found himself in a really weird place. He looked up, …..AHHHH… he was the key.

Many years later the key was gone so was Adam. The box was also broken into tiny pieces and gone. This story was also told to different people. And nothing came back to life.

The End.

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