Builders
“Wow,look” said Tom.
“Stop staring at the sky and go on with your work,
We have to finish this by the end of the day” said Ivan.
“I’m trying to so don’t mind me” said Tom while putting one brick by another.
“ Hey guys, guess what” said Nikilo running towards his brothers,
“ I joined the building competition and the judges gave us all who joined the competition
letters and come read it”. So they all sat down and squashed their faces in front of the letter.
It said:
Dear Nikilo and his brothers,
You have all joined the competition and you only have 5 days to build a
beautiful building near the city. Also you all have to design inside and out.
Time Arrived: 2:30 pm
Where: City Road
But the important part is building it together and that’s how you win, Also there will be a 1 Place,
2 Place and 3 Place and they’re will be a prize for each places.
You have to be there in time or your out of the competition and please no cheating.
Your Sincerely,
Judge Madam
“Wow, WOW” said Tom.
“Are you guys excited”
“No, Well a little bit but I’ll see”
The competition was on place and they were all there.Tom was building a brick house but he was only 8 years old and likes red and Nikilo was only 9 years old and likes blue and Ivan was only 6 years old and turning 7 next week and loves pizza.
Kia Ora Denise
ReplyDeleteI liked your story about builders it make a lot of sense great job maybe next time you could put more information about the builders over well you story is amazing keep up the good work
I like how you started like I looked in the sky then continued.
ReplyDeleteNext time you could tell how you go there?