Here is my Writing:
The Cave
While I was walking with my pet tiger. We saw a lovely forest so we both decided to go in but when we made it through the end of the forest we saw ponds, dirt and the sky was empty. We were afraid. But when I looked back I couldn’t see my pet tiger anywhere. So I looked behind me and around me. Then I heard a sound and it sounded like my pet tiger.I went forward but my pet tiger looked so angry so I pat it’s head and it looked back at me and it wasn’t my tiger. I ran and ran but I wasn’t looking where I was running so I slipped in a very deep hole. Then I felt something on my hand it was very fluffy and when I looked closer it was my pet tiger he looked very happy when he saw me. Then a tiger came he said if you stay here you have to go through the cave and we did we did it because we had to save the world then the tiger said to us you have to be careful my great grandfather has been through this. We went in then the cave started to shake l ran very fast so as the tiger. When we made it through we saw a button that says press me so we did and when we did the cave started to disappear. It disappeared and the cave was gone everyone was happy so as the sun was back. The tiger came towards us and he was really proud. Then he said “ You guys are the new leader of the forest and we did.
Everyone was really happy.
And the cave never came back.
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