Character Description

WALT use graphic organisers to plan our writing.

In class, for writing , we have been using some graphic organisers to plan our writing. It is because, when we are writing we know what to write on the story we are writing and we would be able to manged to type or write quickly.

A graphic organiser is where you plan your writing or a story that you are going to write.

The graphic organiser we used is kind a shaped as a burger but on a paper, so the bun top part is where we put our introduction and for the middle part there are three toppings and that is where the paragraphs go. Each paragraph they have to be different topics but about the same story. And the bottom bun is where you put the conclusion.

In pairs we had to decide on who we are writing about and I was with Heavenly, and we decided to do Plankton from SpongeBob Square Pants. We were also told to have a word bank next to our graphic organiser and write about ten words that describes him.

Here is my Writing:

Plankton

You will never, ever, meet a little creature under the blue sea that can actually talk and can make its own robot and even name it. If you have a secret formula, keep it away from the creature, Plankton.

Plankton is a horrible, evil, cheeky and little creature that lives under the salty, blue sea. He is also known as a thief for trying to steal the secret formula from the krusty krabs restaurant to make his own rusty, old restaurant take over krusty krabs. Every time he fails, he wants to keep trying so he could get his revenge and take over krusty krabs, but every time he tries, the owners of krusty krabs has its own way to keep the secret formula away from Plankton.

The mysterious, sneaky, paltry creature is shaped like a bean (but not curved), has only one eye but a very excellent eyesight, that’s because he usually uses his telescope to spy on things. He can be really insignificant but brainy. This creature has dark green skin like seaweeds that have been in the ocean for a long time. 

Every time Plankton makes an invention it crashes and goes Kaboom! But Plankton is very smart and each of his inventions he makes has a very different look and personality. If he was to make an invention to destroy krusty krabs, he would probably use fire to burn it down or he will use a big hammer to smash it.

Plankton can be very likeable sometimes but sometimes he can be very ungenerous. It would take time to get used to knowing Plankton and think of ways to describe him. Plankton is very, very artistic.

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The highlight parts are were two sentences we had to add in our writing. We were also learning about alliteration, similes, onomatopoeia, and more. We had to choose two of them and write a sentences for one of them. 

Try and guess which is the simile and onomatopoeia.